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		deskamess on Jan 30, 2019 \| parent \| context \| favorite \| on: The heroes of the Thai cave rescue It is a great story but I found the article difficult to read. The writing seemed fragmented and lacked cohesiveness.

jvm_ on Jan 30, 2019 | [–]

Every sentence could have been a tweet. It felt like I was reading a children's book. The sentences were very short.

kzrdude on Jan 30, 2019 | [–]

I found it breathless and disorienting, strangely appropriate.

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